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Message: [QUOTE="OttoMets, post: 1504174, member: 716"] Agree with the second line! It was a helmet-to-helmet hit, but to state only that is, at best, giving the under-informed reader too few facts. It's just as easy to infer that Dungey dropped his helmet into a defender after running a draw (among other possibilities). It's almost a passive voice. Without demonizing #44 or even editorializing, the only correct way to write that sentence has to include some version of "Dungey was held out after being targeted with a helmet-to-helmet hit by a defender and helped off the field in the previous game." Bad writing and editing. (It's the poor writing and absentee editing that catch my attention, but that such a dirty and game-changing play goes unexplained really bugs me.) [/QUOTE]