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Message: [QUOTE="PhatOrange, post: 2417632, member: 229"] and like clockwork you show up to defend them. I don't know if he has an agenda or not, you brought that up. I think it's poor writing. I'm skeptical there's a word limit for a dot com blurb that isn't going to print. But 10 Power-5 offers is a lot more than 'several'. Doing a better job conveying that would be better writing. How's this sound meeting the word limit: before: Vettorello, a 6-foot-4, 277-pound guard, is rated as a three-star prospect with offers from several Power Five schools, including Boston College, Illinois, Iowa, Kentucky and Pittsburgh, among others. AFTER Vettorello, a 6-foot-4, 277-pound guard, is rated as a three-star prospect with offers from more than a dozen schools, including the ACC, Big10, Big12 and SEC. [/QUOTE]