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Message: [QUOTE="OrangeTown, post: 105755, member: 942"] Good writeup. Sean does a nice job of incorporating random and interesting facts to support his statements. Don't know how much feedback you want (or how nitpicky you wanted us to get) regarding his writing, but I'll toss some your way: - the fourth paragraph has a sentence that doesn't quite fit all by itself. "Both of whom are shooting..." I'd change it to read something like "will be eaten alive from outside; both Boynton and Rosario are shooting over 48%..." - no need to hyphenate "down-town" - this isn't really anything bad, but as I read it, I didn't feel like I was reading a Syracuse blog until the fourth paragraph. Felt like it could've been on a Gators blog prior to that. Like I said - nothing wrong with it, per se - just my initial impression, and one that did not detract from the article in my opinion. Those are the only things I noticed. Look forward to more articles from Sean during his years at SU. [/QUOTE]